One in the eye for Cromer:
To be a proper Haiku I think this would need a description of nature but it does contain a season, a place and a description of an action so it’s almost there. I’m not sure of the Fall delights of Hastings, adding a knackered wistful seaside town with the most wistful of seasons could be more coastal melancholy than even Mr “look at that gnarled groyne, isn’t it wonderful” BLTP can stand.
Autumn Hastings: it can also add excitement
To be a proper Haiku I think this would need a description of nature but it does contain a season, a place and a description of an action so it’s almost there. I’m not sure of the Fall delights of Hastings, adding a knackered wistful seaside town with the most wistful of seasons could be more coastal melancholy than even Mr “look at that gnarled groyne, isn’t it wonderful” BLTP can stand.
Autumn Hastings: it can also add excitement
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